The cookie jar

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chstick

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I'm in.
 
99% in the can. Post has begun. A couple pickup shots tonight. A weekend of post work, then upload.

Looking good so far, very pleased.
 
In the poster is there suppose to be a red streak on the cookie jar's reflection? or is that just something on the wood?
 
I did NOT see it coming that the kid would turn out to be the monster... not at all... so huge props for inventiveness! I like to be surprised :)

Seems you had some sound issues... everything seemed really "hot", if you know what I mean. I could hear hiss in the dialogue. I wasn't crazy about what I assume you were using as an exterior wind sound effect (it just sounded like noise to me).

Overall though, I enjoyed your entry and it scored it higher than quite a few! Vampires seemed a popular option in this fest, but yours was unique!
 
The twist was completely unexpected so I like that but I do not understand the significance of the cookie jar or why it was titled such?

If you're trying to show the kid was hungry I think there would have been better ways to do so as to not name the story, "cookie jar."

It was definitely a twist, good job.
 
Turned out really great man. And the gimp was the most brilliant method actor I've ever seen. I'm just sayin. :evil:
 
Nice film. It really seemed like you put care and effort into the story. Sure it was the old getting caught with your hand in the cookie jar, but the twist was satisfying. I might be alone here, but this rated high on my favorite list. Good job.
 
Good movie, I really enjoyed it and I didnt expect the twist at all. Good acting by everyone, and I liked your shots.

But am I the only one perplexed with the blue? Or am I the only one who sees it?
Everyone was blue, and the blood was blue, not really a problem but I was wondering if it had any significance at all.
 
cool short! I definitely didn't see the kid coming.

looking forward to your next entry!

/j
 
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