Spielberg's a Hack!

Michael Anthony Horrigan

Michael Anthony Horrigan

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This one is a departure for me. I'm in.
Read the script HERE.

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Tagline: "Talk about your Close Encounters!"


Mike
 
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I wasn't sure if you were just making a statement or writing a script. But I'm hooked, I look forward to reading it.
 
With a title like that you are bound to rake in a lot of views as well as some curiosity regarding the script. Excellent marketing. :beer:
 
Blaine said:
With a title like that you are bound to rake in a lot of views as well as some curiosity regarding the script. Excellent marketing. :beer:
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You mean you don't think he's a.... oh, yah.... marketing! :D

As far as that goes I don't expect to place, much less win this thing.
I was just having a bit of fun with the script. I hope everyone enjoys it for what it is.

Mike
 
I guess I'll tweak it a bit and upload tonight. Just got back from a nice long weekend excursion.

Looking forward to reading everyone's scripts.

Cheers,

Mike
 
Good story. Nice twist. The dialogue could be tightened, and too Tarantinoesque for me, but that's me.
 
Funny script. For comedic timing, I would have liked to see a little less dialog between the two guys, and some more alien time. He just appears. It'd be funny to have the three of them exchange looks back and forth in confusion without saying anything.

This would make a good skit to perform live.
 
Fun read. Witty and well thought out. I would make it shorter thought. Feels a lot like the opening scene of Reservoir Dogs - lots of talking. (but hey love that film).

Could see the ending coming, but may be just me.

Might be funnier and tighter if running time was shorter by at least a page.

Good luck with it.
 
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