Spielberg's a Hack!

LOVEDED IT!

Yes...two EDs to show my extreme like. That's how I roll.

No real feedback to give. The argument seemed drunkenly reasonable, and the end was damned good.

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MiataFilmSomething said:
Funny script. For comedic timing, I would have liked to see a little less dialog between the two guys, and some more alien time. He just appears. It'd be funny to have the three of them exchange looks back and forth in confusion without saying anything.

This would make a good skit to perform live.
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Thanks! I wanted it to be heavy on the dialogue aspect. That's a departure for me.

Glad you liked it!

Mike
 
seansshack said:
Fun read. Witty and well thought out. I would make it shorter thought. Feels a lot like the opening scene of Reservoir Dogs - lots of talking. (but hey love that film).

Could see the ending coming, but may be just me.

Might be funnier and tighter if running time was shorter by at least a page.

Good luck with it.
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Quite the compliment.

Cheers,

Mike
 
Really funny. Enjoyed the dialogue. No real criticism. Just a really fun read. I think you delivered on the title and the end was great.
 
This is a real twilight zone script!
It was funny and very well told.
ANYONE who's seeking a script for the twilight fest should think about this one!
A very good script!
 
I have to admit, I had no idea where the ending came from, but I laughed anyways. :D

I definitely saw the dialog as Clerks-esque, and I do mean that as a compliment. :)

Loved the "Han Shot First!" T-shirt. Where can I order one in in 2XL Tall?

Nicely done.
 
Great job! It sounded exactly like familiar conversations involving "what if's" and drinking...great job on the dialogue! The ending was hilarious and didn't see it coming...overall one of my top two scripts of the fest!
 
Haha. Extremely entertaining. More like a skit. Skits are fun. Easy to make too. Great job. Let me know when this gets made. It has got to get made.
 
Captain Pierce said:
I have to admit, I had no idea where the ending came from, but I laughed anyways. :D

I definitely saw the dialog as Clerks-esque, and I do mean that as a compliment. :)

Loved the "Han Shot First!" T-shirt. Where can I order one in in 2XL Tall?

Nicely done.
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I actually have that T-shirt. Just a large though. :)
Thanks!

Mike
 
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