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Fantastic everything. I loved it. That black guy really needs to be in LA somewhere. :happy: But I'm dead serious. Real talk, Great effing job Marlon.
Didn't expect any less than greatness from you Marlon. Thoroughly enjoyed it, even better being based on an actual person.
Great work.
I've seen several western style-shorts and this is the first I've seen that really works despite being (I'm assuming) low budget.
Great acting and story all around. Visually it works very well and sets the style.
I enjoyed watching your short Marlon. Great job! Really like some of the lines of dialogue and the acting.
Marlon,
You consistently make some of the most ambitious films for these fests, and they keep getting better and better.
Everything was very well done, but I particularly like how you handled the issue of race in the old west. Great surprise twist! Your lead really played the part with quiet strength and dignity and was totally believable. In lesser hands, the Marshal might have gone all badass and Shaft like. Your restraint really worked in this case.
Shaft in the old west... Now that's another story! lol.
Great job!
Story: I'm a big fan! I loved just about everything in this. The pacing was great and the ending was perfect. You could have went so many ways with this but I'm very happy with the direction that you took. This might be the first one for me that has a lot of heart and soul in it. The ending was moving. Well done.
Acting: Great all around. I especially like the older guy. Casting him was a great choice. Seems to be a lot of great acting this fest.
Technical: Very good. I think the sound design could have used a few more touches here and there. especially the background ambiance. Very good though. The music also seemed to fit right in.
Great film here.
MAH
SPOILER ALERT!
This was a great film. I love good westerns and this didn't disappoint. I actually looked up Bass Reeves. Love how you incorporated a real historical figure into your short. I didn't see it coming that we was a US Marshall.
There are a couple shots where the color correction didn't match, but that's really the only problems I saw with this.
Great job!
I really liked this one. One of my top films so far. But you made one of the common mistakes when dealing with revolvers. They didn't have any bullets. You can see the bullet when you are looking down the chambers. Hell, no one ever notices this though.Great Job!
1. Loved your movie!
2. Really loved your movie!
3. It was nice![]()
Great Stuff... keep the high quality works flowing!! Best in show so far ( halfway through)
Marlon, this one left me wanting to see more. I did not want it to end when it did. I thought the actor that played "Bass Reeves" was very good the other two not so much but the story grabbed me and I was hooked. I enjoyed "The Jones" and I thought it was good but this was much better and more believable. Very good job!
I really enjoyed this. Educational too. I'm really surprised there was a black marshall. I'll have to wiki him. His name almost sounds made up. It's that good.
Great costumes. Loved the editing and sound effects for the gunshot. Good acting esp w/ Bass who I'm assuming you played. Well done.
Really enjoyed this film. I was hooked from the beginning with the music, love the score there, with the guitar. Excellent opening sequence with the shooting – nice colour grading there, bringing us to the title – a great opening sequence.
Acting was great, enjoyed the performances a lot. All your characters were compelling – excellent. Nice script too, very good. Loved the tension, the build up, the deliveries, all good.
Sound was good – clear, crisp, never drawing attention to itself. Good job.
Cinematography was good, some very good shots in there. Enjoyed the grade too, had a good tone to it.
Memorable Moment – “You choose” – 5:18. Great little push in there. Great shot, great actor. A true moment of cinema right here at DVXUser.
The thing I loved about this film was it really was that – a film. You’ve got a script, a great story, great actors, all tied together with good direction, camerawork, sound, and music. It’s all there in this one. Congratulations. One of my favourites.
Marlon, LOVED the film, but confused all over the place ... mostly about minor stuff, like who's that awesome actor (the black guy)?! Great look, deliveries, etc. ... would LOVE to cast him in a film sometime. Your poster looks like you may be one of the starring characters, but then when you list the credits below (on the 1st page), you're not listed in the cast section.
Also, when I clicked on the "discuss" link, it took me to "The Jones", so had to do some looking around to get here.
Anyway .... really enjoyed the film, my favorite I think I've seen from you yet, and certainly has feature ability all over it, making sense since you said it's based off a feature. Great idea ... really dug it.
This fest is going to be possibly the most difficult to choose from yet, as there have been SO many solid works! Nice job, man. :thumbsup:
Marlon...WOW! I just love your work. This is a very solid film and sure to do well in this (and any other) fest. Really great work! What else can I say.
Congrats to the cast & crew.