Joystick Films Presents..."Foresight"

Thank you! The story is pretty straight forward. I hope everyone gets it.
I never saw that spread sheet ZAZA. that would make it real easy.
DVXuser is the Sh!t!! sorry, just had to say that.
 
Simon Höfer said:
No, not yet done. Still need the score and sound design from Herman. Not sure how far he is. And I still have to do quite some VFX work, but I am getting somewhere :)
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When it's done I am sure it will be Ill. I wish I could have gotten someone else besides myself to score it and do the sound design. Herman is dope. Maybe nextime. Either way your film will be the first I watch for sure. :)
Zombies, Germans, and Axes, you really can't go wrong. :thumbup:
 
Welcome to the Fest Filthrich. Like the grimy style of the shots. Looks to definately fit in with the Twilight feel. Looking forward to seeing your film man. Good Luck! :beer:
 
Hey man, not bad of a short for your first entry.

Neat story, really clever.

There were some compression and audio issues but we'll leave that aside.

The acting was good overall, but the voiceover in the end did not work for me at all, it didn't even sound like the woman at the end.

Really nice blood splatters as the guy was hacking the girl in the beginning.

Thanks for sharing,

Robbie
 
It was good ... cool scene in the garage with the hacking

Having him see his own death felt a bit predictable but then you spun it nicely with a second person with the same ability.

nice short
 
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MrKilloran said:
It was good ... cool scene in the garage with the hacking

Having him see his own death felt a bit predictable but then you spun it nicely with a second person with the same ability.

nice short
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Thank you. watching all the others is really motivating me right now. Now off with the kids trick or treating...YAY...yuck.
 
Good job! Interesting edit. I really like the story line, even if it was predictable. Yes, there were some audio glitches, but nothing crazy. I think you "crossed the line" in the OTS shots...I think? (I'll have to go back and check again)

All in all, you made an enjoyable film...congratulations to cast & crew!
 
ZazaCast said:
Good job! Interesting edit. I really like the story line, even if it was predictable. Yes, there were some audio glitches, but nothing crazy. I think you "crossed the line" in the OTS shots...I think? (I'll have to go back and check again)

All in all, you made an enjoyable film...congratulations to cast & crew!
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I don't even know what the line is.:Drogar-Dum(DBG): I am glad you checked it out. Getting any compliment from seasoned members makes me want to get better. Hell it is only my second attempt at narrative film making. Thank ZA YOUR opinion means a lot to a brotha.:Drogar-Smoke(DBG):
 
Nice film. Mia is beautiful - is she single?? Ha-ha! I thought the acting was very well executed except for the lead guy's VO. There didn't seem to be any feeling in it - almost like he was reading, but that's just my opinion and I could be way off. The killer also did an excellent job. I thought it was a good story although I didn't fully understand the guy's purpose. Maybe I'll go back and watch it again. Good job and glad to see you in the fest.
 
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