Teaser for my short

Hey slinks, take your own advice and swallow a chill pill..... lol just kidding my friend. It does feel like a little war has brewed up over here doesn't it? COOL!!!

I am going to maintain my position and not say anymore then I already have to CORUSA. You'll never please everyone, hell, you're lucky if you please 50% of your viewers when it comes to new filmmakers.

Anyway, I'll keep making films that I believe in or that I simply would like to create.

I appreciate everyone's opinions, feelings and feedback. Even if it's extreme like COR's.
 
StMad said:
I've got to disagree videomaniac, there wasn't nearly enough flashing.

J, I thought you were making an exploitation flick? What gives?

thanks StMad. exploitation flick? What do you mean?
 
What people must understand is that your moral compass doesn't get to decide if a movie should be shown, and it definitely doesn't get to decide how other people live their lives.

Your morals aren't everyone's morals. Deal with it. This is a movie about love, it's not a political statement.
 
In general, Jay, for my taste, there isn't enough in the teaser to let me know what it's about. I mean, I get that there are lesbians. But then the V/O says: "How do you survive...two people no longer in love with you..."

I kind of don't understand what the movie's about from those images and that statement. I don't know if I see three people, or if that's what it means.

Am I dense?
 
lol, CORUSA is hilarious! I can't believe you guys are taking him seriously, READ HIS POSTS! this guy's clever and we all fell for it.

I'm going to to have to keep and eye on you ;)
 
gad! morals! oh christ!.............................................................................................. old taoist saying "one who talks of knows nothing of" hey corusa may the great book hit you where the sun don't shine............your HEAD..................ANYBODY GOT A PICTURE OF A OSTRICH WITH HIS HEAD IN THE SAND
 
coffee said:
Thanks man! Really!

Hey CORUSA Design, your "constructive criticism" is given in a way that's similar to bashing a guys knees out with a bat while you tell him that you're just trying to help.

You judge my teaser as being horrible because there are two girls kissing in a scene but then tell me that good filmmaking consists of " script, cinematography, framing, casting, set designs, character development, post-production, etc.."........ I agree with this single line of yours and I feel that I tackled all of these pretty darn well despite the idea that the script consists of two women, well actually three.... lol, I bet you had a stroke over that.... LMAO!

I respect your position in viewing gay folks as being sinners or whatever you feel but I can't get over the idea that people like you still exist.

Oh also, hell yeah I'm in it for the money. I would love to support my children by making films for a living. Silly question.

Well this was a very immature response, attacking me, and not the actual material I posted, whereas my post was directly about the film, not about YOU the person, so with phrases like "I bet you had a stroke over that" and "LMAO", I see I'm the only one taking this conversation seriously, so I'll choose to distance myself from this thread since I'm obviously dealing with kids incapable of an objective conversation and obviously males who haven't grown past the teenage fascination of a woman kissing a woman.

::: Connor
 
CORUSA Design said:
Well this was a very immature response, attacking me, and not the actual material I posted, whereas my post was directly about the film, not about YOU the person, so with phrases like "I bet you had a stroke over that" and "LMAO", I see I'm the only one taking this conversation seriously, so I'll choose to distance myself from this thread since I'm obviously dealing with kids incapable of an objective conversation and obviously males who haven't grown past the teenage fascination of a woman kissing a woman.

::: Connor
Didn't you just attack him for attacking you ? That doesn't seem right now does it ?
I didn't know goats could type ? So are you saying that you have grown past the fascination of a woman kissing a woman? Wouldn't that mean that at one point you were fascinated with a woman kissing a woman in order to have grown past it? and wouldn't that also be contradicting your previous statement about it being immoral?
 
ok JAY i had to see what you sent to me last week. i'll pm you later, i had a whole post written out then i realized this is a teaser thread almost a big boo boo
 
CORUSA Design said:
Well this was a very immature response, attacking me, and not the actual material I posted, whereas my post was directly about the film, not about YOU the person, so with phrases like "I bet you had a stroke over that" and "LMAO", I see I'm the only one taking this conversation seriously, so I'll choose to distance myself from this thread since I'm obviously dealing with kids incapable of an objective conversation and obviously males who haven't grown past the teenage fascination of a woman kissing a woman.

::: Connor


Hey Connor,
I apologize if you feel attacked by me. I didn't intend for you to percieve that statement as an attack, honestly I can't imagine how you deemed that as an attack but I do apologize anyway.

Regardless of your attacks on me, I still respect your views.

How long have you been into filmmaking? would you mind sharing some of your material with us through a thread or PM?


EDIT:

Also, thanks everyone for sharing your views and Kimko, I'll look out for your review.

Jay
 
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CORUSA Design said:
Sorry, gross. I'm sick of these immoral fads.

::: Connor

CORUSA Design said:
Well it's like this...

This is constructive criticism on how to make a good film stand on it's own, don't get offended please.

::: Connor


Gross? Immoral? Don't be offended though? You just railed against homosexuality, how are people not supposed to be offended again?

EDIT: YOu know what nevermind. Corusa obviously makes up the 33% of america that still has its head up its ass.

Dude, without jest, people like you are the reason I stay up at night sweating and terrified.
 
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coffee said:
thanks StMad. exploitation flick? What do you mean?
Sorry mate, it was a joke that missed the mark.

You've caused quite a stir with this teaser (then again, maybe it's more accurate to say COR caused quite a stir with his reaction :)). With the interest you could almost consider putting this, your boxing short and a "making of" on a dvd - if you thought they were good enough. I'd certainly be interested.

What are your release plans for these? Festivals?
 
Well so far it's headed to festivals, about 28 have been decided on and a few more are in the wings.

I sent it out for replication today and will have them in my hands on Tuesday if all goes well.

I was thinking of selling the Torn DVD for maybe 5 or 6 bucks or so to help bring back some of my investment and make the process less financially painful on me but I'm still unsure about it even though costs for DVD duplication and festival submissions are going to murder me.
 
1. It's OK for women to kiss if their in love.
2. It's great for women to kiss.
3. I'm attacking everyone for the original attack on coffee and coffee's return attack.
4. Anyone who uses a a guitar analogy against women kissing need attacking.

Charge!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice teaser.
 
Cheesesailor77 said:
lol, CORUSA is hilarious! I can't believe you guys are taking him seriously, READ HIS POSTS! this guy's clever and we all fell for it.

I'm going to to have to keep and eye on you ;)

I doubt it... I looked up corusa design and came up with their website that does weddings and what not. Well, if it is someone playing a trick on us all(as i have seen people do it on these forums b4) I would feel quite dumb LOL.

Yea sorry Coffee lol. I made sure I took my chill pill along with my dayquil(damn weather is killin me) for today. Coffee goodluck on the festival circuit!
 
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