T2i Tattoo Music Video

I like it. Although I think you could have maybe added some shots of the shop. Maybe some facial expressions from the chick after it was done to show that she's happy with it. Seemed a little dark too. This a hole in the wall joint? or like a legitimate shop?
 
More diversity in your angles and shots, i.e.: Facial expressions, Medium shots, wide angle, and some macro shots would be nice. Also you need to add some sound, I know Tattoo places always have that distinct sound of the machine at work.
 
Honestly you did a descent job, but should have been a lot better. Here's some things to consider

* First and foremost wrong choice in music, pick something relevant to what you are doing and cut to the tempo and feel of the song
* Use a different lens, seems like you kept a 50mm on it the whole time. this lens while great has it's place and your lack of focal lengths and angles truly killed the project
* Find a way to stabilize your shots. Handheld shots and jitters are fine here and there, but a whole project like this really lacks professionalism.
* Why are we in a tattoo shop? What is the meaning to this?
* like another poster said you should have heard that tattoo machine and even get a lot more b roll


Overall I would say good try, but if you ever want to get paid in this industry pay attention to what I just wrote.
 
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