Short film "Led Astray" - A girl's last cry for help takes an unexpected turn.

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CColton

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Short film "Led Astray" - A girl's last cry for help takes an unexpected turn.

Take a look at my newest short. 2.5 minutes long. Criticism and honest suggestions for improvement would be greatly appreciated. This is my second film.

 
Excellently shot with great pacing! My only comment is that the sound quality and the delivery of the lines were a bit weak, and the last line was a bit cheesy, but all in all, that was great! How'd you do the smooth shots up the stairs?
 
MalcolmOng said:
Excellently shot with great pacing! My only comment is that the sound quality and the delivery of the lines were a bit weak, and the last line was a bit cheesy, but all in all, that was great! How'd you do the smooth shots up the stairs?
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Thank you! Yeah we didn't have time to do any ADR :(

I have an 8-foot slider I built so we put one end down the staircase and the other at the top of the stairs. This is me operating it:

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