Hawk Teflon
Veteran
Hey guys, this was my entry for FictionFest, but it's been retouched. I took the critiques and used some of those to pull it together more. It's weird, though, because I had to make the quality look a lot crappy than it did to begin with, I added buffering, and lag. Things that you don't want in a video ... but I think it really worked here. Well, that's all. Hope you enjoy: