Scenioritis

heh, not bad. The color correction after the two boys go outside looks great, just much more color depth than inside (a bit too drastic for my eye). The lighting on the paper with the pen was good, but the lighting where the guy is on his laptop in the dark was bad. I can see a lot of grain in it. I would have lit it more, and just darkened it in post. But when the kid has the wife beater shirt on at the end was lit pretty well.
 
yeah the dark thing on the laptop was due to the fact that i was using a f/4.5 he he=) that was the day before i got the second lens =) thanks for the advice!
 
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Nice piece, you had some nice shots, I agree with the comments on lighting. The title on the video itself looks makes it look like the film is about Spanish speaking gentlemen! ha ha..... "senoritis" not "senioritis"..... maybe you have a little bit of it?
 
hahaha well being that I myself am a freshman at the highschool (the only one in the class =p) i may have freshmanitis=p hahah
 
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