"Reflection" - A short montage, would love to hear constructive criticism

[digifruitella]

http://vimeo.com/15930078

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iO18metXjCI - 1080 option here

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What worked, what didn't - what could have been done better, etc. I'd like to hear your thoughts on this please.

 

[zaarc]

lots of great shots. ..some cool focus racks..nicely done..i liked jsut about all of the compositions.i felt some pacing issues...like flasjhing a memorial plaque long enough to only see that is what it is withougt being able to read it, but tehn lingering on a large three word hotel sign. but later on ther eare some really nice rhythmic edits to go with the music. and i would have swithced the last two shots. end with the dog

 

[digifruitella]

thanks man. I'm glad I showed signs of ability. I actually re-edited that ending and switched the shots. I too agree.

 

[Everts]

love the grade !

 

[digifruitella]

Cool, I appreciate any feedback I get - thanks to all you who went out of your way to type up a few words.

 

[stip]

Some very nice compositions, 1:20 is my favorite, great great image!
I agree the grade is lovely, what exactely did you do because I don't really see any crushed highlights?