New Comedy Short: Man-Hole

John_Hudson said:
I think this is great.

Very adult, risque but great stuff. The only thing I can say is Technically it needs some polishing; photography, editing, sound....

That's not to say its horrible; it is not. I find above average.

The writing is great and the talent are real; and that sells it for me.

Great job! I laughed all the way through. This makes Sex in the City seem PG.

Concentrate on growing those technical areas and expand on locations and atmosphere and you have a winner !
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Thanks man. I read your posts a lot on this site and have come to respect your opinion. The tech aspects are why I am making like one short a month this year. Practice, practice, practice!
 
Nice work that was really funny. As many other here have mentioned the "go, go spider web" line is a gem. The rattling off of what she does for him was well done too. Thought it was a very cool short.
 
intresting desperate, u layed all on the line with that o ne 4 real the acting was very good it was all good ur directing to , but its the most aint see nothing like it on the site short i seen i liked the beging with the silouette lighting that was good what u edit on and ur camera settings ??? oh yea i see juniors there andu talk about staten island so i can surely say ur from nyc nyc here reprsent in si here orginally form the bk

peace n luv

Mark Dog
 
Mark Dog said:
intresting desperate, u layed all on the line with that o ne 4 real the acting was very good it was all good ur directing to , but its the most aint see nothing like it on the site short i seen i liked the beging with the silouette lighting that was good what u edit on and ur camera settings ??? oh yea i see juniors there andu talk about staten island so i can surely say ur from nyc nyc here reprsent in si here orginally form the bk

peace n luv

Mark Dog
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Yeah Dog, BKLYN represent!

Thanks for the feedback.

Camera was the standard 24P Scene File, and editing was Vegas with AE for the end sequence.
 
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