It would be helpful to see even a short clip of this in the "before" state, to see what you did. Lots of clipped highlights... was that in the source footage, or was that the result of your "correction"? Flesh tones seem to be way off in several shots; the girl looks washed out and pale through much of the video.
As a viewing note, the stuttery, jittery sections were really, really hard to watch. Literally made my eyes hurt as they were trying to find something to focus on but could not. Smooth the editing pace out a bit.