Ya know to be honest, screamo isn't my kinda music but I liked the video. Quick cuts seemed to fit the style music. The lead in thing was waaayyy tooooo looong. (1:19?) Chop it down to 15 seconds if you have to have at all.
I agree with videohog, the actual musiv bideo part worked fairly well, but the beginning didnt really work for me at all. I also thought that the makeup effects were less than convincing so I would keep the closeups on him as short as possible (I believe that spielberg said that they figured out in Jaws that they could show the shark on screen for 16 frames at a time and have the audience realize it was a shark but not be able to tell what a shitty prop it was)