Mercy by Troy Ruff

Gary Sconce said:
Seems your review 'TRANSMIGRATED' between you two! Hehehe. :Drogar-BigGrin(DBG)

Troy, CONGRATULATIONS on making the second cut! Well done! :kali:
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Thanks man, Im happy we made it as well, we'll have to wait and see for the next round to see about 1,2, and 3rd. :) Best of luck to everyone.
 
Mercy

Mercy

Great job Troy. Ian and Nicole and I have watched it a few times. I wish my RED would have been here to borrow but it looked great and probably wouldn't have made that much difference. I'm glad you made it to the finals. I think you definitely have a good chance.
 
blaremedia said:
Great job Troy. Ian and Nicole and I have watched it a few times. I wish my RED would have been here to borrow but it looked great and probably wouldn't have made that much difference. I'm glad you made it to the finals. I think you definitely have a good chance.
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Thanks man! Red would have been nice, maybe next time. HXV worked out great as always. Hope your movie went well.
 
the winner?

the winner?

I tired to get enough posts without just spamming but failed. I guess it wouldn't have mattered much. I thought dispatch was well done but very unsatisfying. I thought yours had much more of a story arc. oh well, it is about progression and Mercy definitely shows that. congratulations again.

Far and away the best prize that life has to offer is the chance to work hard at work worth doing.
- Theodore Roosevelt

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blaremedia said:
I tired to get enough posts without just spamming but failed. I guess it wouldn't have mattered much. I thought dispatch was well done but very unsatisfying. I thought yours had much more of a story arc. oh well, it is about progression and Mercy definitely shows that. congratulations again.

Far and away the best prize that life has to offer is the chance to work hard at work worth doing.
- Theodore Roosevelt

Justin McAleece
http://www.redonerental.net
Justin@BLAREMedia.net
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I agree, Dispatch was kinda weak.

Nice job guys. Troy we should get together and work on something!

Well done.
 
Slimothy said:
I agree, Dispatch was kinda weak.

Nice job guys. Troy we should get together and work on something!

Well done.
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thanks guys, it would be great to do something together. Its nice working with fellow DVXUSERS. I have pretty big project coming up this summer, Ill let you know more details when it gets closer. Thanks everyone for your support and feedback. It really helps. :)
 
I dont know ,i think acting was weird here,theyre shouting standing so close to each other and it looks very cheesy and kinda fake,or is it the sound quality maybe ?
Some lines are not needed like "hes my little brother", i normally dont judge scripts but cinematography here was good beside some mistakes in editing,i would start this differently because at the very beginning its visible that actors are just acting,i would make this like hes coming back from somewhere and sees his brother and then he starts to asking questions ,because right now when it is how it is i feel that its made for audience to let them know about the plot and it sounds weird/cheesy when theyre explaining what they were doing, it doesnt really matter and they didnt had to do that.
Too much screaming/shouting here and i agree about grabbing woman's neck,i felt antypathy for male character from this moment.
And F**ck, not enough f**ck in this short film.<sarcasm>
 
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