it looks like it twitches or jumps a little the minute it done zooming out in the very start. maybe at a easy ease to the keyframe unless it already is. still looks cool to me
I don't want to be an ass, but you just basically took the template and modified it. I would try to do something a little bit more unique, even if you could modify the tutorial to produce a different effect it would be better.
yeah looks like andrew kramer's thing. I say make the colors more dark (no pink) and change it up... looks too similar to Kramer's. Then again only the people who know videocopilot would say that, the average person would have no clue. But you run the risk of having a hundred other people doing the same exact thing.