EeDobarganes
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Critics, advices, tips and recomendations are welcomed, just 1 year in video experience. Thanks550d + 18-270mm + 50mm f1.8.
La Escalera, Santiago de Cuba (01:13)
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Again, it's a great look at your culture... especially for us in other countries.
I'd like to see a few more wide shots. Establish the location for the viewer. Give a sense of where we are. The guitar amp is cool and all, but I never really got a sense of where it is in the larger picture, or why it's there.
Also, go easy on the rack-focus. Nearly every shot used it, and after a while it becomes a bit tiresome. Save shallow DOF/rack focus for occasional (read: not frequent) places where you really want to viewer to focus on a minute detail, and let the other shots show more of the surroundings.
Keep going! I'll keep watching!
I'd like to see a few more wide shots. Establish the location for the viewer. Give a sense of where we are. The guitar amp is cool and all, but I never really got a sense of where it is in the larger picture, or why it's there.
Also, go easy on the rack-focus. Nearly every shot used it, and after a while it becomes a bit tiresome. Save shallow DOF/rack focus for occasional (read: not frequent) places where you really want to viewer to focus on a minute detail, and let the other shots show more of the surroundings.
Keep going! I'll keep watching!