HansK
Veteran
I think you did a great job with this video. Nice mix of shots with some interesting compositions. A little bit of a story thrown in. Some cool timelapse sections. Editing is clean. Sure the singer was a little bit off, but this being his first and also since the whole thing was improv, I can see the issues. But, don't forget to Direct. If you feel the actor/singer (yes, everyone in the video is an actor) isn't performing to a level you think is required, tell them... Direct them!