Heinz :30 Spot

THat was great - I really like the use of the lazy susan at the end - kind of reminded me of some weird dolly shot minus the dolly.
 
That was excellent how it was used! It was subtle enough I didn't even notice it moving at first.
 
Pretty slick commercial. It could be the Utube presentation that's squashing the audio, but if not there are some parts of the dilaogue/ambience that could be further worked, IMO.

BTW, edit your opening post with "vote for us", before the Mods delete this thread altogether. That's one of the cardinal rules here on DVXuser ... you can't solicite the site for votes. All you can do it ask people to view, but not try to influence them to vote for your particular submission. Remember, you won't be the only DVXuser on here that'll be submitting to that competition....
 
Good work. Nice energy to it. Audio does have something off when the guy gets off the couch, looks just a bit out of sync.
 
... ahhhh good, but why didn't you cut the white out of the heinz logo! eshh. sorry, little things always bug me.
 
audio? hmm, I guess we can add birds, etc? the audio is out of sync on this clip for some reason, but the one we submitted is fine.. Odd?!?

Thank you all for watching an I'll beg for a vote when we get into the top 15 ;-)

Sorry about the logo thing.. just didnt want to do the work <---- Lazy!
 
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