Gun Case
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Mark Dog
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heres the link forgot to post it after wrote message my badhttp://www.stickypod.com/stickypod_upload/uploads/guncase.wmv
its 9mb long wmv
its 9mb long wmv
Saw you had a number of views without comment, so I watched and added my opinion.
The cc was OK. On cuts the case or cam seemed to jump a little.
I guess if you watched it once it would seem normal, however I couldnt imagine a hitman carrying pistols that size around in a case that large. I could imagine he opens it once and places all the pistols or some in perfect cutouts such as a can be made with inserted foam like a pelican case then closes it. I think a CU would be better or actually seeing the hands open the case, the shadow cast when the case was opened without seeing the cause of the shadow was distracting.
Just my 2c.
The cc was OK. On cuts the case or cam seemed to jump a little.
I guess if you watched it once it would seem normal, however I couldnt imagine a hitman carrying pistols that size around in a case that large. I could imagine he opens it once and places all the pistols or some in perfect cutouts such as a can be made with inserted foam like a pelican case then closes it. I think a CU would be better or actually seeing the hands open the case, the shadow cast when the case was opened without seeing the cause of the shadow was distracting.
Just my 2c.
Lawsuit_Boy
Veteran
Pretty neat idea. CC was fine, IMO. You could do a LOT of CC work on these shots and it would really matter because no people are involved. But the blue hues was a good idea.
Yeah, a few of those cuts just didn't work right. Might want to go back and try to smooth it out.
I kind of agree with the shadow distraction. You can tell that part of it is from someone opening the case, but if this is meant to be more of an abstract work in which only the case opens and closes by itself revealing he hitman's new guns, then you'd probably want to work on getting some of those shadows out of there. Eh, but at the same time they kind of work in your favor. Shadows are useful, and they didn't cover the guns, but more or less emphasized the guns.
final thought: Cool short.
Yeah, a few of those cuts just didn't work right. Might want to go back and try to smooth it out.
I kind of agree with the shadow distraction. You can tell that part of it is from someone opening the case, but if this is meant to be more of an abstract work in which only the case opens and closes by itself revealing he hitman's new guns, then you'd probably want to work on getting some of those shadows out of there. Eh, but at the same time they kind of work in your favor. Shadows are useful, and they didn't cover the guns, but more or less emphasized the guns.
final thought: Cool short.
Lawsuit_Boy
Veteran
oh, one more thing. I noticed that the camera seemed to be bumped a few times when the shot was ending. Try using the remote to start and stop recording for things like this. That way nobody touches the camera and risks bouncing images.
Jay Rodriguez
Coffee Member
or just lock the tripod down
Mark Dog
Well-known member
glad u liked lawsuit thanx and the remote would been good idea, lol i hadnt even put the batteries in it yet lol just took the camera out box and did somthing got my dvx100b for xmas , and thought good did little more CC also but though the blue looked good as far the shadows go at first i didnt like them either but i saw it drawed attention to the guns after it was opened so i thought was pretty cool after while and had ame idea about case ncje only case i had it was my camera case i used thanx for the feedbacck lawsuit , coffe and NC
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Mark Dog
PS oh yea check out my other post WALKING HAND and gimme some feed back there to
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Mark Dog
PS oh yea check out my other post WALKING HAND and gimme some feed back there to