jasonthewho
Veteran
This was really high quality work Richard. Looked very pro, especially the cinematography, the acting, and the special effects (the arm marks and blood were awesome).
Because it was so good, and because you are getting so strong as a filmmaker, I'm going to be nitpicky.
The story wasn't really my thing. I like to have someone to relate to, and there was no hero here. It would have been really cool if one of the two victims had survived and gotten the drop on the cop guy at the end.
I thought the extreme editing moments, for ex. the stabbing moment, seemed unnecessarily over-the-top. The music as well felt too epic for me, too much. I think you were pushing so hard to make this film impressive, you pushed a little too hard. The movie is exciting and interesting as it is, it doesn't need so much decoration.
Regardless, an incredibly solid entry that I'm sure will place well. You are a for serious director and filmmaker, and I respect you immensely.
Because it was so good, and because you are getting so strong as a filmmaker, I'm going to be nitpicky.
The story wasn't really my thing. I like to have someone to relate to, and there was no hero here. It would have been really cool if one of the two victims had survived and gotten the drop on the cop guy at the end.
I thought the extreme editing moments, for ex. the stabbing moment, seemed unnecessarily over-the-top. The music as well felt too epic for me, too much. I think you were pushing so hard to make this film impressive, you pushed a little too hard. The movie is exciting and interesting as it is, it doesn't need so much decoration.
Regardless, an incredibly solid entry that I'm sure will place well. You are a for serious director and filmmaker, and I respect you immensely.