first real music video

Lighting and exposure are pretty good. Editing pace is nice.

The soft focus/shallow DOF was way overused and grew tiresome. Same with the slider moves... they seemed repetitive, especially on the three vocalists.

And the doctor's voice mail a the head of the video... that is a terribly unnatural read. It sounds less like a doctor leaving a voice mail and more like a high-schooler reading a speech at assembly. That kind of lost me before the video had really even started.
 
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