Fight Scene Clip

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SilverWolf

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Hello All ,

Yesterday I was in the house putting together my film resume and felt like shooting something. So I grabbed my gear and went over a friends house and we came up with something. Everything we planned out on the spot and here is a clip of a fight scene in it.

Note- This is all in camera audio and no Sound Effects have been added yet but they will. I just wanted to get a little feedback. Also note that i'm the only one with martial arts experience.

So without futher ado
http://youtube.com/watch?v=OH2lpfUSdJg
 
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snap his neck please lol , it was good man very realstic i liked documentary style fight scene , just could used a more lighting cause when hes on the floor choking the other guy u can see to good more lighting, no need for close up or zooms just leave it on take docu style realstic that way.

peace n luv

Mark Dog
 
thanks I just looked at the clip on youtube and I think they have it darker than it really is. Because it's bright enough on the regular file on my LCD monitor and production monitor
 
i hear that man , see if u can post a link so member can down load , and wait to see the rest , and u can add or leave out sfx ur choice id leave them out and do the doc u style thing man , just liek u got it, and at the end follwo the guy out who gave him the ass kicking and watch him walk out and shut the door and pasue on the door for a bit stay on it , lol lol know im directing ur movie and ur teh camera man i guess lol

peace n luv

Mark Dog
 
wolfy it was dark i couldn't see the faces but i liked the reality of it. not a whole lot of yelling and noise like a lot of people film. which fights usually don't have. kool! now did you choke him out or snap his neck
 
definately a pretty realistic fight between these two guys. The intensity was there, the realism was there, but lighting and camera work left much to be desired.
 
Thanks for the comments. I didn't mean SFX ( Special Effects ) What I meant to say what sound effects. I know it was dark but it really isn't that dark I have to figure out a way to show it without it looking so dark. I'm actually just going to choke him out. Him saying break the neck isn't actually a part of the scene it was the the camera man giving directions
 
I found it hard to watch due to your brightness issues, but most importantly, I think you should've had some music going to keep the intensity alive.
 
SilverWolf said:
Thanks for the comments. I didn't mean SFX ( Special Effects ) What I meant to say what sound effects.
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From my previous post I state that I didn't add any sound effects so that would include : Foley , ADR and last but not least "Music"
 
u dont need to put any cuts leave it like it is no cuts everthing is not MTV , it looks realstic , when usee things with ur eyes there no close ups , just make the lighting better so everyone can see uraudience can see.

peace n luv

Mark Dog
 
hoofandmouf said:
ha! a fight scene with some grappling in it.... props

could use more light though and some CUs err something
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Thanks man ! This was my first actual fight scene that i've done. I actually hate being in my own scenes because I'd rather lend my experience behind the camera then performing in front of it but I promise these will get much better

coffee said:
That would of been great if it were two chicks..... ; )
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Lol I'm suprised you ever have male actors :)
 
coffee said:
LOL, don't hate man! haha
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Is your boxing movie starring some hot girls? Are they the same ones from Torn?

Antar,
The stuff looked pretty good. What type of martial arts do you do? Looks like maybe ju jitsu or aikido. I am a tae kwon do black belt. Doing it for about twelve years. Though I haven't practiced in the last two or so. Nice work. Can't wait to see more fight choreography from you.

Alex
 
I actually do Wing Chun currently but I didn't do any of that in the scene. I've been doing martial arts since I was 6. I started out in Tae Kwon Do then went to Karate then Kuk Sool Won and now I take wing chun. What funny is that the whole reason I started filmmaking in the first place was because I thought the fighting in a lot of peoples movies looked bad to me and I wanted to change that. So wish me luck :)
 
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