any tips or comments

[jjbrown]

Here is a short video I did for a snowboarding based non profit. Its my first video and was wondering what you guys think??? Any tips or comments.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zm7iB1QocBo

 

[dory_breaux]

Pretty cool man! Lot better then alot of snow sports vids. Compression was pretty bad tho...

 

[Steven Bogda]

you should add a drop shadow to the first SOS cause it looks like the other white text has drop shadows