A little movie I made with two of my friends for an English project.
http://vimeo.com/2594489
Let me know what you guys think.
http://vimeo.com/2594489
Let me know what you guys think.
A Distorted View
- Thread starter Aragon
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Lawsuit_Boy
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Really enjoyed it. I left you a comment on vimeo, so I'll just copy and paste it here.
"If I were absolutely pressed to critique it, I'd say my only concerns are the cuts to black (a little overused and felt less effective than they should have been) and the voice over. Really though, I loved the color palate and the construction of the scenes. Seemed like you made great use of natural light through windows during the first few scenes in the house."
"If I were absolutely pressed to critique it, I'd say my only concerns are the cuts to black (a little overused and felt less effective than they should have been) and the voice over. Really though, I loved the color palate and the construction of the scenes. Seemed like you made great use of natural light through windows during the first few scenes in the house."
Thank you...yeah I agree about the cuts to black, but I felt putting the clips all together at the beginning would have moved to fast.
blackdogs377
Well-known member
that last part was really well done.
HerzogisGod
Well-known member
excellent work. love that all this was accomplished by two people.
you're a real filmmaker in the sense that you know how to tell a story without a landslide of words; just a few direct images, well composed and simply lit.
That's filmmaking
you're a real filmmaker in the sense that you know how to tell a story without a landslide of words; just a few direct images, well composed and simply lit.
That's filmmaking
