7D short film, feedback appreciated.

[VillageBoi]

Hi everyone. We shot this film not too long ago and had it shown at the Prince Charles Cinema, London.

It looked great on the big screen; so different from what it looks like on my laptop.

Would like to know what you think of it.

WARNING - Do not view with minors, contains moderate adult language!

http://vimeo.com/13021482

 

[Alex H.]

Nicely done! I like the look, love the story.

The one critique I have is that the sound did not sit well with me. The Foley and FX were a bit too forceful... to up front in the mix. They need to be noticed but not above everything else. The sizzle of the cigarettes kind of took me out of the moment... it was an unnaturally loud sound. And was the dialog ADR?

 

[VillageBoi]

Nicely done! I like the look, love the story.

And was the dialog ADR?

Wow, that was quick. Thank you for the feedback. I'm happy you generally liked it. We so ran out of time and *gulp* did half the dialogue ADR on the bridge where we shot.