550d - promo shoot

[Curnsie]

Here is the link to a short teaser promo I shot and edited for a website. Shot entirely using the 550d with various Canon and Nikon lenses. More details on Vimeo.

Original edit: http://vimeo.com/11654996

New edit uploaded: http://www.vimeo.com/12274499

Thanks for your comments.
Enjoy.

 

[stinkpot]

Hey Drew. You have some nice shots and a really up to date look going on here. What I think this piece needs is more sound layers, much faster cuts and maybe add some motion/time ramping effects to increase the overall intensity. I think the key to this style is to not the viewer linger on any one shot... rapid fire.

I dig the look.

 

[Cieloent]

Here is the link to a short teaser promo I shot and edited for a website. Shot entirely using the 550d with various Canon and Nikon lenses. More details on Vimeo.

http://vimeo.com/11654996

Enjoy.

Great job, looks good to me

 

[insanityfw]

Nice job. I really like the look and feel of it. Some of the walking shots looked a bit forced, but certainly not that distracting in relation to the entire project.

 

[Curnsie]

Thanks for the comments guys. They help me to improve.

Stinkpot, editing is something I struggle with. i know the look I want but translating that to the edit is something I often miss. I agree, I want it to have more intensity. Now that I have time I will hopefully get a chance to look at it again.

 

[Curnsie]

http://vimeo.com/11866431

I took onboard some of the comments made here. I tried to up the pace in parts and give it a more edgy feel.

Thanks

 

[Scott F]

great job, looks good to me

+1

 

[budha]

Hey man, from an editing standpoint, second one looks way better!

 

[Curnsie]

Hey man, from an editing standpoint, second one looks way better!

Thanks. I appreciate the comment.

 

[wannabeapilot]

thats awesome!

 

[Curnsie]

thats awesome!

Thanks!

 

[Outlaw Productions]

Hey Drew. You have some nice shots and a really up to date look going on here. What I think this piece needs is more sound layers, much faster cuts and maybe add some motion/time ramping effects to increase the overall intensity. I think the key to this style is to not the viewer linger on any one shot... rapid fire.

I dig the look.

I like the look as well, but I agree with Stinkpot, the look editing should match the feel/look and I was waiting for faster edits, tighter shots and a deeper soundtrack. Constructive criticism is always good thats how we all get better!
:happy:

 

[Curnsie]

I like the look as well, but I agree with Stinkpot, the look editing should match the feel/look and I was waiting for faster edits, tighter shots and a deeper soundtrack. Constructive criticism is always good thats how we all get better!
:happy:

Thanks for your input. I agree criticism helps you grow.