I enjoyed the framing, composition and overall tone of the piece. The jerky shakes were not my cup of tea however. Do you own a shoulder mount or something to help stabilize the shots?
The only thing that nagged me was the speed of the wind and how it blew the hair and the scarf... it didn't match the tempo of the music, which I think should pretty much drive the tempo of the visuals also. Maybe that doesn't make sense, but that's the only thing that nagged at my brain.
this looked great! the one thing i'd change is in shots like 0:13-0:15, the handheld is a bit too much for this cam, i can see a bit of jello going on. otherwise i like it, slow-mo might help, but then you'd lose a lot of story.
boston huh? i'm in cambridge. we should meet up - i just did a short noir teaser with my t2i and the nifty fifty, http://vimeo.com/12395909 .