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Your first two posts presenting your script are very entertaining! Just thought I'd let you know I enjoyed it haha.


Thanks. I can't wait to see you die. ..................

Awkward Moment


......in the movie, in the movie. Not in real life. No. That's mean. I would never say that.

You do die in the movie, right?
 
Thanks. I'm looking forward to getting some feedback. Kinda lost perspective after seeing it the 961st time.

Lets see- 961 x 6 minutes = 5766 minutes / 60 = 96.1 hours. Yup, that sounds about right.


I showed it to a couple friends and family and they all had to watch it twice or more to catch some of the hidden goodies. Great responses from everyone so far, (of course they would say that) but you guys here will be the real critics.

Don't hold back... You can't possibly hurt my impentrable ego. :Drogar-Dum(DBG):
 
I showed it to a couple friends and family and they all had to watch it twice or more to catch some of the hidden goodies. Great responses from everyone so far, (of course they would say that) but you guys here will be the real critics.

Don't hold back... You can't possibly hurt my impentrable ego. :Drogar-Dum(DBG):

I promise to be kind and honest. You do the same! I want to learn.
 
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où est le Camera? :)


Careful... Spoilers Ahead !!!!!
 
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Ahh yeehawnow. What a great thread. Very inspired. Love the presentation and all of the BTS you've given us. I'm guessing that it's only indicative of the fashion in which your film is being crafted and with that in mind, I must say that I am definately looking forward to seeing it. Mad props man. :beer:
 
Dude, fabulous short.

The end twist gave me goosebumps.

Creepy little girl in the end to, and I loved the score.

The editing was really good, and it really added to the suspense/creepiness.

This will do great, man!

Robbie
 
This is an excellent film! Enjoyed every second of it. Characters were great (good casting). Loved the set...and noticed you got yourself in there too! Best acting I've ever seen you do. LOL!! Score was fab!

There's really nothing I can give you in terms of negative comments...it all worked for me.

All in all, there's no way I can give this one anything but the very highest rating. Congratulations on making a truly enjoyable film. I'd be surprized if this wasn't in the top 10!

Cheers!
 
Okay, here's my notes straight off the nice little chart Zaza posted:

F'ing brilliant! VFX not over the top. Startled several times. I thought "WTF? He'd just happen to have that?" at the ball bit, but the end made the randomness make sense.

And now, to elaborate. The clues to the nature of this story are all there the entire time, I just didn't see them for what they were. Even the title clues you in. This is a well crafted film, and easily the "sleeper" of this fest. Full 10 from me. :)
 
Fantastic. Nailed the theme PERFECTLY. The colors in that room were amazing. Totally got my heart racing. One of the best I have seen so far. But in terms of Twilight Zone Theme, this is easily the best. great job. The only one I watched twice too.
 
Winner. The perfect short and THE most creepiest I've watched in any fest, personally.

What you REALLY gotta think about, after you watch it, is what really happened.

SPOILER BELOW

This little girl was playing with dolls, talking about religion and drugs, anti-depressants (if I'm to assume right). Good grief, what a rockin' short.

I kid you not, man. I had to rewind about four times to see what happened on the couch. Infreakin' sane. LOL So subtle yet effective as hell. Not to mention the shadow play. The second watch puts the shadows and everything in perspective.

Perfect TWIST OMG win
 
Wow, I'm flattered. :tongue:

Thank you Robbie, ZaZa, AmyO, and filthrich for your wonderful comments!

I'm so glad you all liked it.
Just about to sit down and watch all the other entries... Seems like it'll be a great fest!
 
Third time watching it in just a second. Good grief. Undersold and overdelivered.

"Get me a crystal ball and a candle". What a perfect WTF moment that makes so much more sense as soon as the end hits. LMfao
 
great stuff, man. i echo the sentiments expressed by kholi. if i was going to nitpick, i'd mention that there were quite a few instances of double or triple shadows being cast from your various light sources.
 
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