XH A1 PSA - YouTube Contest

[Psynema]

ahoy all,

just got done with the YouTube Smartpower.org contest - to make a 30 second spot promoting clean energy use.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-hOgm11vrq0

Let me know what you think - was a bit rushed on my part, so I'm a tiny bit let down as it's not quite what I expected, but seems solid at least - first thing I shot and edited with the camera.

 

[ESTEBEVERDE]

ahoy all,

just got done with the YouTube Smartpower.org contest - to make a 30 second spot promoting clean energy use.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-hOgm11vrq0

Let me know what you think - was a bit rushed on my part, so I'm a tiny bit let down as it's not quite what I expected, but seems solid at least - first thing I shot and edited with the camera.

Very Decent.

I liked the transition on the end.

Substance, perhaps you could tighten and sharpen a bit of the narative?