i am joking...slightly..because honestly the first one is too blue and the second is too yellow. and i'm not concerned about the room..it's the actor in the frame. did you light the actor? that's the light you should white balance to, not the room..granted it's a commercial right and so the store is what's important, but the actor is what people will connect with first.
man i am not explaining that too well...
if you purposely want the scene blue or yellow then i understand. however the first shot looks cold and stark. the second shot looks like it might be night time (granted it just might be night, but why the shades? i guess i'm not that cool )
anyway...light your actors, white balance to that then light the room. but i know the footage is already done and i've jumped in way late on this...i'm just giving my opinion
ok well we didnt light the actor because he's not an actor, just the store owner. this is just footage to be used amongst many other clips for a promo dvd... it's supposed to be showing a party that was actually going on at the clothing store.. it wasnt staged or anything at all..
my issue isnt really whether or not i can fix the second shot in post... it's if i should tell my camera guy to avoid yellow/dark looking shots as i prefer the slightly blueish whites ..