What If...? (Short film?)

[DirectedByMP]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UA6eRU5yEqg&hd=1


"In life, you build relationships with a lot of different people. Some you stay friends with, some you get to know really well and maybe even fall in love with. But what are the benefits of falling in love with a best friend? What happens when everything falls apart? What if you two stop talking as much as you used too? What if that relationship you two just slowly disappeared? What if...?"



Constructive criticism would be really appreciated whether it would be about the film, script, audio, go for it! Please don't sugar coat, don't be afraid to hurt my feelings

For this video i used the Canon EOS Rebel T2i with magic lantern installed. The lens i used was a 24-70 Sigma 24-70 lens and i used a FlyCam Nano to stabilize the footage. The lens+camera is so heavy when i put it on the flycam nano! I think i need to balance the flycam more.

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[Fritz bakon]

I like the concept and the voice over is great. Your white balance or color correction seemed to be a little skewed in the shots indoors. As for the flycam I do not think you have it balanced correctly because it was not steady. Hope this constructive criticism helps.