watch my 1 min experimental: "SUBURBIA"

You had some nice shots in there and I liked the experimental feel to it. All in all, a nice little piece but I found the beginning to be a little slow, probably because the camera doesn't move at all. If those had been slightly differing perspectives/angles in the first 20 seconds, it'd be a little more interesting I think.

With editing, there are moments where I'm totally in the piece but other's where my focus is leering off. I think you need to punch the editing up and make the piece a little faster; rather than being a decent 1 min piece, you could turn it into a 'solid' 30 second piece. OR go out and shoot more footage for it and build upon it if you want to keep it at a minute... eitherway, I like the 'feel' of the piece, nice job. I'd just like to see the pacing increased, a little more frenetic I guess. Hope that helps.
 
I really liked it. I think the pace was good, those longer stationary shots fit the music really well. Good editing, cool effects. Good stuff.
 
I hear what you're saying Geoff, that first scene was supposed to be a timelapse of everybody leaving at the same time in the morning so it is static. Should have thought of that, thanks.
 
I really liked it! Editing was great, good shots, and the idea of splashing red in just took it to a whole new level. :thumbsup:
 
it kept me entertained, i liked the experimental feel to it, just strange , i like that kind of stuff
 
It's a bit overly dramatic, but it wasn't my aim to freak out. More an excersice in making something out of nothing.
 
Yeah Dooser, on putfile you have to select your aspect. Just below the clip there is a drop down bar.. select original as apposed to 480 or whatever.
 
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