SJX
Veteran
This looks good. For some reason a couple of shots stand out as more filmic. Just the way the lighting and skin tones were rendered. I'm talking about the shots at 1:20 and 3.59.
This has the video look. I don't think it comes down to just lighting as you have low-key shots in there with very filmic lighting but it still looks video. I think it may be down to exposure and camera settings. I hear with this camera is best to "overexpose" than "underexpose." But I'm starting to think overexposing is what is making it look like video. Also, which f-stop did you shoot this? Most shots, specially inside the apartment look very deep focus or not shallow enough. This may have contributed to the video look.
They both look technically good though and the dark shots when she sleeps looks pretty clean. Maybe vimeo compression was hiding the noise or it didn't have any.