Video Critique: Season Pass Video for Roundtop Mountain

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Prophetmatt

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[video]http://vimeo.com/user901164[/video]

I had some free time at work so I made a video for our season pass sale that ends next week. Any critiques please let me know! This is the first time I've ever made anything with anything close to a story line, but with something even such as simple as this, it was so fun!
 
the security guy's voice stood out in the beginning - I'm assuming it was from the in/on-camera mic. I couldn't really see much of the season pass as the end - since that is the focal point of the video that could have been lighted/framed/shot differently to show it off a bit more. the music worked ok but hearing it as the main sound for a solid minute or so was a bit much - at least for me. you could have made this a minute long video with quicker action and quicker cuts and in my opinion it could have been a stellar piece. definitely not bad though - those are just a few things that come to mind. great concept btw :)

Cheers,
Adam
 
Thank you! I also feel it was probably a bit much. Yes it was the on board mic. Unfortunately I don't have my lav yet. Thanks for the critique!
 
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