"Umbrella"-Student Short Shot on XH-A1

I found it interesting enough to watch the whole thing, which is a good thing.
Some continuity issues.
 
I guess that's good! Where did you see continuity errors? I'm going to check to see if they can be easily corrected. Thanks for the comment!
 
Issues with the shirt color between arriving and leaving on what I would assume is the same day, then what I assume is the "next day" the shirt is the same as the end of day one. Then not a big deal but he walks across a park to get to the front door but when they leave the car is right out side the door. Maybe a different entrance but caught me as strange......

Of course I only watched it once so maybe I missed the time line.

Also it appeared the shirt pattern was freaking out a bit. Maybe a compression thing, maybe a my monitor thing.
 
Thanks! We did mess up the continuity a bit on the shirt, but we were not able to reshoot those scenes, so we are going to hope a normal audience won't notice too much.
I'm can see where you might get confused with the car, but it is actually parked in the same place--the entrance and exit are in different places.
I appreciate the comments!
 
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