trailer to my short

[carlone]

I'm hoping some of you will take the time to give me a little feedback on my trailer, footage or even the sound. Everything is shot with the DVX and there's 1 clip shot with the M2 on the DVX.

http://web.mac.com/bcmusik/iWeb/CODEOFJUSTICE/TRAILERS.html

 

[Blaine]

I couldn't get the trailer to play.:undecided

 

[carlone]

It plays fine on both my mac and pc. I didn't make it stream so you'll have to wait about 30 seconds for it to download.

My mac account isn't always streaming friendly.

 

[chris grieder]

i liked it, but i would have changed the titles, they were a little boring. and that effect at the end where it kind of likes like a painting is a little weird

 

[Lawsuit_Boy]

I dont' mind that effect at the end very much. Personal style choice. Yeah, the titles weren't so eye catching or edgy, but they weren't terrible either. I really liked this trailer. Very interesting. that shot of the dead woman of the officer's(I'm assuming) shoulder is excellent. great cc work. The background audio seems really well mixed as well. All in all, really good job here. Definately want to check out the short!

 

[shadow_dog_dx]

the trailer was great, the news logo was awesome but i also found that the titles were way too simple and basic.