Trailer for my short action film "TRIGGER"

Nice trailer. The shots of the couple looks awesome. I liked everything else, but I think you could tighten up the trailer a bit to give more of a tease. Like some of the action shots for instance - if you just took out a frame or two here and there, like at the end of a strike or punch. If you take out a frame or two and don't show the reaction of the person being striked, but instead let that impact segwey into the next shot, it might make it a little crisper. Just a suggestion. It still looks really good and looks like you had some pretty good action. Good luck.
 
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