Till The End (short film of encouragement)

Its ok,i dont like that blacks arent black and 50mm is too compressed ,i would go with 35mm for portraits and other stuff and 50mm for close ups to show emotions but first i would stabilize it,you can turn tripod upside down and mount camera on it if it has screw for it on both ends.
 
thanks for your feedback bwwd. I actually used my shouldermount for that. thats the look i wanted. I actually everything there is the look i wanted. I understand the 50mm comment though, and yeh maybe I could have used my 28. Thanks for taking the time to look.

cheers.
 
The 50mm doesnt bother me, but I really don't like the color grade and frankly, the film doesn't "earn" a hans zimmer song. Thats not to say that you didn't do a good job with it, but those songs are appropriate for sweeping shots of an army going to war, your film needed something simple and understated.
 
thanks for the taking the time randomname...really appreciated. Of course i disagree which is the beauty of this Art :)
 
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i liked it, i just thought it needed more at the end to sell the climax. another slomo of him sticking something epic, some kind of payoff. but i liked the look and feel.
 
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