This Cold Feeling(Music Video)

Visually i think it looked pretty good. im just starting out making music video as well, so i don't how much feed back i could give you. But from a viewer stand point it looked good to me . If you don't mine could you chime in on your lens and set up
 
stop adjusting focus if your singer is not moving at all and sits on the couch, whats the reason to even touch focus ?
I would also tell him to not move towards camera so much so you dont have to focus after his every move.He could move just left/right, so you dont have to focus.
You know when i see that someone has problem with focusing then im SURE he wasnt used his camera and lens long enough.If you would practice with cam more often then your focusing would be much much better.
 
The video was ehhhh...the song needs improving also, u had some sort of fast chipmunk effect almost on the hook...Rhymes were to simple, use more multi-syllabics in ur bars...some of the visuals were cool but Idk how it went with the story you was telling...For story songs I think its better to tell a visual story of what your saying like the song Stan from Eminem...Yea just improve on your voice projection, Presence, how you mix your vocals, add some adlibs to strengthen your rhyming words...switch up the flow too, u rhymed every bar with the same flow for 3 verses...switch it up and show versatility...

hope I helped in some way
 
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