The Suitcase (5 min. short)

You know what, that was excellent!

Your shots were extremely well placed, good music, acting, everything just worked. "Based on a true story" I need to know more!

Seriously though, very well done.

Mike
 
In realtiy, Monika doesn't lie and Jessie isn't the son the of house owner. Obviously the names have been changed and I've embelished it to make it more interesting. But yea, the general deal about the dog and the suitcase and all that is true.
 
Very nice. I enjoyed the story quite a bit :)

Good music, nicely shot. If I were to nitpick, I'd say it was unnecessary to show Monica stuffing the dog into the suitcase toward the end - I mean, we already knew that, and it was just unnecessary exposition, clearly done to "inform the audience"... clumsy and totally couterproductive. Otherwise A+... I smiled :)
 
OldCorpse said:
If I were to nitpick, I'd say it was unnecessary to show Monica stuffing the dog into the suitcase toward the end - I mean, we already knew that, and it was just unnecessary exposition, clearly done to "inform the audience"... clumsy and totally couterproductive. Otherwise A+... I smiled :)
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Actually, I thought that part was pretty funny! :laugh:
 
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