the light

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kurt farr

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hey guys , been a fan of this forum for a few years, great work by everyone. i have just finished my movie and i have posted it online:


http://web.mac.com/kfarr1/iWeb/Thelight/home

if you all have time please check it out and let me have some feedback. it's a pretty big file(153mb) but if you have broadband it should be fine, just give it some time to start download and then press play

thanks in advance
 
Remarkable achievement. Really well shot. Excellent DP work. Fine performances (though the woman was a bit shaky in the beginning). Great moods. Nice locations, nice props, nice location dressing. The story was not bad, though not amazing.

Tempo was fine the first third, then slightly too slow.

One serious criticism: very poor sound, which ruins this. Everything was bad about sound. Badly miked. Badly mixed (many times, background effects obscured the dialogue). Mediocre music and poor placement (should have been more sparse).

I'd give the DP department an A++ and the sound department a D.
 
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