The Job - A short comedy film.

[FrozenFilms]

http://youtube.com/watch?v=y9-_0uZndYE

shot it in early October, haven't had time to do anything more yet but please let me know what you think of this video! thanks.

 

[HBlack]

Walkie talkie didn't sound real, the audio cuts abruptly in between shots, generally uninteresting composition and editing, the guy drops too late after the gunshot, the acting was atrocious, audio was pretty bad in general, glaring jump cut at 2:10, sky replacement would have added to it, music didn't fit.

That's what I noticed as I was watching. The stuff I made when I was starting wasn't any better, keep at it.

 

[Marlon Ladd]

The more you do it, the better you get at it. Keep pushing.

 

[x_WOrPIG_x]

The gun shot sound affect was a shot with a silencer...I didn't see a silencer on the gun...