Hard to judge on the technicla issues given what you were going for. I do think perhaps you should've gone more over-the-top on the cheesiness. It's hard to top the actual commercials you were parodying. 
I enjoyed it. I agree it could've been a bit quicker with the jokes, a little faster paced, but a lot of the jokes that were there were funny. The Do Not Use list was definitely the highlight, I think.
Fun stuff, thanks.
I enjoyed it. I agree it could've been a bit quicker with the jokes, a little faster paced, but a lot of the jokes that were there were funny. The Do Not Use list was definitely the highlight, I think.
Fun stuff, thanks.