Hey guys! Hobbyist here.. (don’t be too harsh) I recently started uploading my films to YouTube - I create short stories with my Nikon D5300 and DJI Spark. (Nikkor 35mm/ Sigma 10-20) feedback welcome and thank-you for watching!
A couple of nice shots in there - but my advice would be to keep it much shorter. Without any dialogue or narrative to motivate the imagery it all starts to get repetitive.
I love the dutch shot of the sign near the beginning.