Hi
I thought it was just okay as a feature trailer. As work for a church it's great!
Couple of small things just watching it one time through - so I may be way off... but here goes. Looked like a light reflecting in picture frame glass in the early scene, quite distracting. Maybe take that out in post. Secondly I am thinking you need to track the license plate on the car better.
I liked the music, acting, pacing, and the camera work. Lucky church! Above all it all worked for its message.