the eXchange: featuring blood & bullets!!!
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darkstyle8
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Re: the eXchange: featuring blood & bullets!!!
I liked it. Great editing. The music was just a tad too early 90s action for me, even though it was "run lola run". I think you have great sound editing skills. I think you might want to focus a little more on the music considering its all shot and edited nicely. Be creative in your musical selections.
Hope I could help. Great stuff
Peace,
Steve
I liked it. Great editing. The music was just a tad too early 90s action for me, even though it was "run lola run". I think you have great sound editing skills. I think you might want to focus a little more on the music considering its all shot and edited nicely. Be creative in your musical selections.
Hope I could help. Great stuff
Peace,
Steve
mastermind
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Re: the eXchange: featuring blood & bullets!!!
really liked it. I don't think that the break in the axis is too bad because the second shot is a wide establishing shot which establishes their placemnt on the set.
2 comments though:
1-you should try to control the lens flares a little more. Based on how many there were I would assume you did it on purpose. I think it would have been "slicker" without them.
2-the final shot of the contents of the briefcase should have been locked down. It yells amateur and is the last impression you leave with the viewer. it was just too shaky.
Other that that no comments. It was great!
really liked it. I don't think that the break in the axis is too bad because the second shot is a wide establishing shot which establishes their placemnt on the set.
2 comments though:
1-you should try to control the lens flares a little more. Based on how many there were I would assume you did it on purpose. I think it would have been "slicker" without them.
2-the final shot of the contents of the briefcase should have been locked down. It yells amateur and is the last impression you leave with the viewer. it was just too shaky.
Other that that no comments. It was great!