The Exam (T2i)

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I shot this with a Canon T2i and a Rode VideoMic.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A2n4KOfDfDc
 
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I'm sorry, this is pretty backhanded, but...this was funny enough for me to want it to be better. Framing was arbitrary, the punchline wasn't timed right and didn't have enough punch, the dialogue was stilted and drawn out...but the line at the end of the first scene gave me a chuckle. Keep doin' the thing.
 
this had real potential. But i thought the acting wasnt good and the pacing was 2 slow. the music was also kind of annoying and 2 high in volume for me. Most of it seems underexposed though.

I really think it was well written and with the right actors i'd have been laughing my ass off :) and wouldnt even think about the technical stuff.

Keep doing your thing.
 
thanks Jambredz. Yeah it was under exposed it was for a contest and my time ran up... i was going to fix it in post but just didnt... they learned their lines the same day we were shooting. i figured better under then over exposed, then just fix it. time was def. not on my side... for lighting all we had was worklights from home depot and a diffuser that photographers use.
 
kool. no worries. I def understand the whole time issue. As i said I was well written IMO, i'm sure u;ve learnt alot from it to apply to your next project.
 
Well done for an early project. I liked the acting, but it was at times a little flat. I agree the punchline wasnt delivered in the best way, but i liked how you kept the editing pretty tight overall
 
Thanks Jon, yeah the next project is in works now. Im going to be renting some lights to make it look better. I def. learned allot to apply on the next project.
 
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