Teaser trailer for GREED

[allahkaram]

Its a teaser trailer for my short I did for my Intro to Filmmaking last quarter. I was given a premise "Sin destroys the sinner" we have to choose one sin among the Seven Deadly Sins. I chose GREED. Thats what my short is actually called as well.

Its about this guy who is pretty well off interms of money and status but his thirst for money drives him through strange paths in his life. Its a pretty short teaser but hope you all enjoy it.

I apologize for the youtube link but I don't have my own website.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sYXxrmk_vA

 

[alveraz]

I would suggest fleshing out the story a little more in the teaser. I know its a teaser, but I have no idea what I just watched. Looks like it could be cool, but what's going on? If you can 'show me' greed that would probably do it. Just a thought, good luck!

 

[allahkaram]

I would suggest fleshing out the story a little more in the teaser. I know its a teaser, but I have no idea what I just watched. Looks like it could be cool, but what's going on? If you can 'show me' greed that would probably do it. Just a thought, good luck!

I'll take that thought into consideration. I can already think of ways to make greed more obvious. Thanks again.

 

[Jon Starr]

Yeah, it looks cool, but I'm in no way interested to tell you the truth. I just have no clue what it's about at all.

 

[OldCorpse]

It's not bad, but I'd try to do something that puts the idea of "greed" across, so we focus on that. Good luck!