Tales Of Ordinary Madness

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cwardle

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Words from Charles Bukowski's "Ham on Rye"

This was the first short I have shot on the 7D. I like how the small size of the camera lets me get more guerilla.

I used the kit 18-135mm, 50mm 1.8 and a pentax 100mm macro with adapter.

Let me know what you think about it.
 
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This was awesome. The acting was good- on first viewing it felt a little hammy at times like with the pen but second time it reads as a newfound confidence- the VO was interesting I like that dash of Hunter S. Thompson in his cadence, and I like that pan cut trick at 1:45, the cinematography was really good.

One of my favorite movies is The Face of Another by Hiroshi Teshigahara and this is like a perfect humorous mini version of it. I just love that weird vibe it creates by shooting in real locations mixed with more stylized sets, and you captured all the self-loathing, alienation, dark confidence that comes with anonymity, that Face of Another has but you did it with more humor, something Face of Another lacks.
 
Thanks for the feedback! I am glad you enjoyed it and will definitely check that flick out.

I wish I could take credit for what you enjoyed about this, but it's all Bukowski's amazing writing.
 
really liked this...the trick at 1.32 and 1.45 was really good. the cinematography was good.

nice work.
 
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